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Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Elite by Rachel Van Dyken Book Review


Blurb:
When I won the annual Eagle Elite College Scholarship lottery, I was thrilled. After all, my grandma had just died and I wanted to take care of my aging grandpa -- he couldn't be a farmer in Wyoming forever. And graduating from Eagle Elite meant opportunity.

But I wasn't counting on meeting Nixon.

Nor was I counting on the rules of the Elect.

1. Do not touch The Elect.
2. Do not look at The Elect.
3. Do not speak to The Elect.

And worst of all? Don't discover the secret they hide, because in the end, you may just realize... it's about you.

*This is a New Adult Book, blood, violence, cursing, sexual references, and drug use. Not recommended for those under 17.*

Meet Rachel:
When I'm not sitting by my computer thinking about writing, you can usually find me....

Eating
Watching way too much reality T.V.
Eating
Reading romances aka researching ;)
Daydreaming
Did I say eating??

Okay, okay...I don't just sit and eat and read, though I think the world would definitely be a better place if we ate more chocolate and read more books. Just saying. ;)

I grew up in a small farm town where cows outnumber people and tractors are more common than cars. I desperately wished to one day wake up and be a princess. My sister and I often played "pretend," though she was always the princess and I the prince or evil step mother.
Maybe that's why I write? I wanted to be the princess so desperately that I decided to write my own story. I've always been a dreamer and a thinker. I blame my parents for allowing Disney to pollute my mind, not that I care, considering I live and breathe all things Disney.
I went to college thinking I would change the world one child at a time via counseling...I ended up being a K-8 school counselor for around five years while getting my MBA....the whole time I kept feeling like I was not necessarily doing something I was very passionate about.
One day, after a terribly sad counseling session with a few young girls--I began typing.
I've been typing ever since.
In 2011 I had my first book published. I cried, jumped up and down, and called everyone I knew!
I can only say I wake up wanting to do nothing but fall to my knees in thanks to God for his many blessings.
I was told one time by a very wise person to sit and think about your childhood. About the dreams that you had, the fantasies you wanted to come to life...by digging in your past it's often found that you can decide what your destiny is.
I was a prince, a toad, a monster, the evil step-mother, and sometimes the slave girl waiting to be rescued.
So now, I'm an author.
Sounds about right...
I love to hear from readers...and if you ever stop by Idaho, hit me up. We'll go to Starbucks and talk about food, books, romance, and rakes. :)

http://www.rachelvandyken.com 



Excerpt: 


All I knew was that the Elect were way more important than I could possibly imagine or even believe.
I finished in the dry goods section and made my way over to the candy aisle. I needed a little boost after all the crap that went down today. I settled on Twizzlers and sighed.
“Almost done?” Nixon asked out of nowhere.
I screamed.
And immediately ten men in suits were in my aisle, guns wielded.
Awesome.
Nixon laughed. “I scared her. Nothing’s wrong.”
The guys nodded and disbursed.
“Who are you?” I swallowed as Nixon’s breath fanned my face. Oh gosh, I was going to faint if he kept getting this close to me.
“I could ask you the same thing.” His eyes narrowed as he cupped my face and examined my eyes. “Brown. Interesting.”
“Brown?”
“Your eyes.”
“They’re plain.” I tried to pull my head free from his grip, but he tightened it.
“They are beautiful. Don’t let anyone tell you any different, Bella.”
His eyes searched mine and then he leaned in more. Our lips were inches away. My heart was going crazy. I leaned in.
“Hey, Nixon, the guys are getting antsy,” came Monroe’s voice. I wanted to tell her to leave.
Nixon jerked back immediately and shook his head as if he had been the one under the spell, when he very well knew he was the bastard who cast it.
“You done?” He pointed to the cart.
“Um, yeah, I’ll just go checkout.” I pushed my car to the checkout stand. Nixon walked behind me, patiently waiting.
“Glad to see you’re buying enough food so you don’t starve in between classes.” He smirked.
“It’s your fault I have to buy food,” I snapped, a bit irritated and still obsessing over the almost-kiss.
“What do you mean?”
“My key card, you asshole!”
He rolled his eyes. “Stop being difficult. You have two key cards.”
“Huh? Are you high?” I threw a bag of potatoes chips at his head. “Phoenix stole my card the night you made him set me up! That same night you were off-campus doing who knows what! I only have the red card that you gave me the other day!”
The color drained from Nixon’s face. “What the hell are you talking about?”
Okay, he was high. I mean, he was there! “In the hall when you said that was the best you could do, and you handed me the card to the Red Cafeteria!”
“Because Phoenix said you were uncomfortable eating with us. The Red Cafeteria is better than the commons—”
He gripped the shopping cart, and I could tell a battle was waging in his mind. Finally, he shook his head. “Bastard. I’ll deal with it. Do you still need this food then? If you’re going to be eating with us now?”
“Yes.” I swallowed, because who knew when I was going to make him or one of the other guys angry and lose my rights to eat meat?
“That will be one hundred dollars and seventy-two cents.” The checker announced, sounding bored out of his mind.
I pulled the roll of bills out of my hand and tugged off the rubber band. The wad of hundreds fell to the ground. This is what Nixon’s stupid presence did to me. It made me nervous and a bit crazy.
I swiped the bills off the floor and froze.
Impossible.
“Something wrong?” Nixon asked in an irritated tone.
“Uh, no, yeah, umm…” I didn’t really know what else to do, so I handed him the stack of bills. The same stack that was wrapped in a one hundred dollar bill, in order to cover the ten one-thousand dollar bills.
“Shit,” he muttered, then pulled out his own wallet. He swiped his card in the ATM and punched in his code, then placed the card on the little table while he pulled out his cell. “No, you ass. I didn’t have cash on me. Yes, I know I can be traced. Who pays you, dipshit? Who? That’s what I thought. Now deal with it.”
“Abandonato,” I whispered under my breath reading the card while simultaneously trying not to eavesdrop. “Is that your last name?”
He didn’t answer me. Instead he was firing off instructions to someone on the other end of the phone and grabbing the receipt.
Well, at least the checker didn’t look bored anymore. Nope, he looked like he was about five seconds away from shitting his pants.
And then things got weird. As in, weirder than they already were.
The men in suits formed a circle around us as we walked back to the car, and that’s when I saw a glimpse of something I’d only seen in movies.
A group of expensive cars in the parking lot and even more expensive-looking men and old men getting out of the cars.
Nixon said nothing as we got into our waiting SUV. Neither did I. I wasn’t sure if I should be freaked out that so many men in suits were surrounding us or what.
“Are we, um… are we safe here?” I asked in a small voice.
Monroe was already sitting in the SUV and put her hand on my shoulder. “Of course, why wouldn’t we be?”
“Oh you know, because of that.” I pointed as a man that looked as old as Grandpa pulled out a gun I’d only seen in action movies, and walked into the store.
“Um, are we witnessing a murder?”
Tex and Monroe laughed while Nixon shook his head and offered a smile. “No sweetheart, just business. That’s all.”
He handed me my wad of cash and looked back at Monroe and Tex. “You guys need to go. We have some more shopping to do, and it—”
Monroe rolled her eyes. “Yeah, I can imagine how it will be.” She smiled in my direction. “See ya later!”
They hopped out of the car and walked to the other waiting SUV in front of us.
“What was that about?” I asked, shoving the money back into my purse.
“It’s going to be a long afternoon.” Nixon whistled.
“Why?”
“Because we are freaking living our own Romeo and Juliet.” He smirked and hit his steering wheel. “Alright, new bag right?”
“Yeah, oh, and I need to pay you for the groceries too. I feel so stupid. I had no idea I had big bills, or that they even existed, or that Grandpa…” My voice trailed off. Why would Grandpa give me such big bills? Was that why he wanted me to hide it?
“Those bills went out of circulation in the fifties. You know that right?” Nixon asked.
I shrugged and started playing with the radio. “Sorry, I’ll figure out a way to cash them out so I can pay you.”
“You don’t understand.” He laughed humorously. “I would never accept your money. Ever.”
“What? Why?”
“It’s no good to me!” He snapped. “Just drop it.”
Was it because I was beneath him? Because I was from a farm and poor? I crossed my arms over my chest and looked out the window. We were silent the entire way to the mall.


Book Review: 
You know how you get the craving for a certain genre of a book randomly sometimes? Well I was having a mafia craving and up on my goodreads account pops Elite by mrs. Van dyken. Thank you book gods. I devoured this book in one sitting. 

This is trace's story. Trace is a country farm girl who is getting the chance of a life time to go to one of the most prestigious schools in the country for college. Thank goodness for the lottery system. Leaving her grandpa behind shes off and ready to start her new life as a college student in the Windy City. But the best times of her life quickly turn into her worst living nightmare.

Trace is hounded, stalked, befriend, embarrassed, humiliated, and protected by the elect.If your confused by all the words I just piled together then you should be because I was. The elect is a group of bad boys who run the campus. I mean run like the president of the USA would bow down. Mr. Elect himself Nixon takes an interest In trace. It's his goal to humiliate her for her known protection. Ya I'm was really confused by this and my choice of words for him was far from lady like. 

Nixon and Trace's relationship in this book made my head spin. Hot and cold doesn't even begin to hit on this chemistry or lack there of at moments.  Once the truth behind this secret society was revealed all hell broke loose. What do you expect when the most powerful mob boss of Chicago is also the student body president? Trace's  life is on a continued downward spiral when she finally uncovers the truth of who she really is. Yup def a wow moment. Through all the drama and tears trace has a one constant that always had open arms for her CHASE, BFF/cousin of Nixon and body Guard to trace. Needless to say  Trace/Nixons love and chemistry was great but her tender/lovingly moments with chase..sigh.  The epilogue in this book gave me what I love most.. Me screaming hell ya a possible love triangle in book 2! 

Good job mrs. Van dyken. I need more of this story ASAP. I'm torn between team chase or team Nixon. This house is divided!! 

Cheers,
Dr. Books

Book rating: 4.5 stars/A


Purchase links:  Amazon or Barnes and Noble


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2 comments:

  1. Best review ever!! Thank you so much! And yes, love triangle in the next book, one that even had my loyalties divided! I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. The release date is set for October but we are ahead of schedule so it could be sooner. Thanks again for the incredible review ;)

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    1. Omg I can't wait. Please keep me updated about book 2!

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